Sean Pendr

Quote: [he first lines of the poem are written in blood.] this is great! this provides a wonderful hook which really gets the readers exited about your story, I found ...

Quote: [“Dragons, fantasy or reality? That’s the question cryptozoologists have been trying to prove, but only met dead ends by reality. Can there be a creature who is not an ...

[Light & Dark In the life, exist two ways: Light and Dark. Both Light and Dark, kind’s ways that can to have several reasons for acquire. Much light like Dark ...

[Fallowdell looked into the mirror and saw a man. Silver-limned, long-faced, wide grey eyes glazed, watching - it wasn’t him. But it never had been. Quietly, he pulled crumpled-crepe draping ...

[The sun had barely risen. Clad in nothing but boxers, Ajax stood up and wandered through the flat, avoiding the obstacles: the abandoned bottles, the forever damp stains, and the ...

[The rain seemed to come down as if to poke fun at the people who loved the sunlight. It came down from dawn to dusk without stopping. Craig had always ...

[I knew why only several people had come to my dad's funeral. It had happened at my mom's, aunt's, and uncle's before. Everyone looked at Nathan and me like we ...

[The reflection staring back at him was tall and skinny, and was topped by black, unruly hair that stuck out at all angles, made worse by a nights tossing and ...

this was good but this part deosn't really make any sense: [His lips pulled themselves together in a smirk as he rattled off the place names one after the other, ...

good story but some bad transitiond like in this paragraph: [“Stupidest thing ever…” I found myself muttering, probably in reference to what I was doing. Quite suddenly, I found myself ...

it was very good, i see no point with the apprentice stuff and the adults of the confederation sound like extremely selfish teenagers.......but this paragraph was very well done: "In ...

if hes already outside why did he pull a fleece out of nowhere and put it one, lack of minor detail there may i suggest making a sentace lik ' ...

hiya EM its me forom the chat room i just stopped by to llook athe stuff you wrote.......... its very well done........i would have to say that you should describe ...

This is probably the best thing i have read on this website so far! the characters are exilently designed and it has sort of a creepy feel to it, yes ...

how can the monsters be drivin off by the sheilds alone? if the monsters retreated how were they unsuspecting of an attack in the midst of battle? you need more ...